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December 29, 2012
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Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D40
Shutter Speed
10/20 second
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F/8.0
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18 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Jul 4, 2012, 4:40:54 AM
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Golden Gunpowder by adamsk8 Golden Gunpowder by adamsk8
Comment with any edits you think could improve the picture. If nobody comments I'm not going to waste my time editing. Please consider this shot is unedited in your critique.
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La-Nee Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great shot - perfect moment!
I like the warm golden colors and straight lines.

I think it would look better, if you cut the upper part away, above the light golden sparkling fireworks. With that you would have a perfect composition with horizontal lines and thirds. It would also fit more to the golden ratio.
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adamsk8 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I had tried that thinking the same thing but it looked so squished into the space. The open space adds a release so the fireworks don't look cramped and contained.
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La-Nee Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's interesting. :)
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hilldren Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this as it is
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adamsk8 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks. I don't think I would edit it.
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